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[Sundance]

there's also a . where there should be a , in that sentence and a . where there should be a ;.

should be:

"When asked by Black Ice why he would risk his life by meddling with things he shouldn't, Traction's answer was a simple one; "They move too slow"."

[BHMike]

Guys, files are already sent in to be printed. I asked the staff to look at them, when no suggestions or edits came in, they went to print.

[Blitzkrieg]

there's also a . where there should be a , in that sentence and a . where there should be a ;.

should be:

"When asked by Black Ice why he would risk his life by meddling with things he shouldn't, Traction's answer was a simple one; "They move too slow"."

I agree with the first swap of the period for a comma, but if we're going to be that analytical, the second period should be a colon ":" rather than a semi-colon.

Also, if we become too analytical, I am concerned that it will discourage more file card reveals.
Blitzkrieg

[Sundance]

thinking about it, you're right, a colon would be better than a semi.

[Emags]

Hey, can we see the file cards for Joe Canuck and Black Ice too?  Not sure if you updated the bios from the originals.........

Thanks.