My part is done..... I have to hand it to those that do Dios. It takes alot of work. This is the first one I've done.... and after you've all read it - it's most likely my last! ;-)
I had to change my 'storyline' because it was geared to him going back to Montreal....... damn you Dave! ;-) (kidding).
I"m going to start a new thread that will list each one in order - but we'll keep them going in here.
Chapter Two is
here.
Trust me.... it's not a great work of writing by any means!
Mike
Mini-Update:
The pictures of the 'Cliff' were actually a part of the Rockies. While dribing through them, I spotted this one portion near a turn that I KNEW would work for this. So I stopped, and started taking pics - there is NOTHING but a LONG LONG drop on the back of this little rock-hill. I nearly dropped 'Agent Buck' down the other side. On the cruise ship, JoeCanuck AND my camera nearly went for a swim with the whales. Just thought you'd all like to know. ;-)
Mike